Pretty Like Us
Pretty Like Us is a book written by Carol Lynch Williams. It was published in 2008 by Peachtree Publishers. It is written in first person; Beauty McElwrath, a twelve-year-old girl, is the protagonist. The story is written in a southern country dialect and takes place in a small town in Florida.
Plot summary
Beauty McElwrath dreads going back to school this year. She has no friends to speak of and her teacher is also her mother’s boyfriend.
She dreads it even more when she meets Alane Shriver, who suffers from an aging disease. Beauty ends up making fun of her, just like people have made fun of Beauty in the past, in order to try to gain friends. She runs away from school twice to forget some of the mean things that she is willing to do in hopes of gaining friendship.
Her mother, grandmother and teacher all encourage her to make friends with Alane, but Beauty fears the disapproval of her classmates. She must realize that she wants to be friends with Alane on her own. She eventually makes friends with Alane through an illegal midnight drive to the beach and an incident with a wild pig running into Beauty’s mother’s prized car. However, Beauty is embarrassed by being friends with Alane when they are at school and says she is sorry about her actions in front of the entire classroom in order to regain Alane's friendship.
Beauty’s mother starts a restaurant, her dream for quite some time. Beauty works as a waitress to help out and gain some pocket money.
Meanwhile, Alane gets sick and Beauty finds out that not only does Alane look very old, her body itself is very old and she is slowly dying. Beauty both finds and learns how to deal with losing her best friend; and Alane finally found a friend and fulfills her own dream by the end of the both, with a little help.
Character Descriptions
Beauty McElwrath: Beauty is from a family of all strong women and trying to live up to their expectations. She often falls short of them in her attempt to gain friends and popularity at school. She is very shy, secretly adventurous, and generally very kind. She still talks to her Great Granny Dorothy Lu Lu occasionally who died a few years after her birth.
Alane Shriver: Alane is suffering from a diseased called progeria, which ages her very quickly. She looks like she is in her seventies when she is only in the sixth grade. She is very brave, outgoing, and mature for her age. She is also looking for a friend that she can’t find.
Jamie Borget: Jamie is dating Nina and is also Beauty’s teacher. He is kind to everyone in his class and pushes Beauty to do the right thing, even if it goes against peer pressure. He wants to marry Nina, Beauty’s mother, but is waiting for the entire family to be ready for that change in relationship.
Nina McElwrath / Momma: Nina, Beauty’s mother is strong and used to working with the little she was given in life. She has worked for most of Beauty’s life as a mechanic, which is not an approved of job for a woman in her small hometown. Her dream is to own her own restaurant, which she has been working toward for a long time. She had Beauty when she was thirteen years old and is only twenty-six in the story. The most important people in her life are her mother and daughter, with her boyfriend taking a less important place after her families’ needs.
Maggie McElwrath / Grandma: Maggie is a very independent person and although she is Beauty’s grandmother, she is only in her forties. She is very quirky and says what she thinks. She acts as a disciplinarian to Beauty when Beauty gets into trouble, which happens quite a few times.
Great Granny Dorothy Lu Lu McElwrath: Great Granny Dorothy Lu Lu died saving Beauty from drowning when she was toddler. She is the woman that Beauty looks like and she is the woman that Beauty seems to model herself after. Great Granny Lu Lu’s spirit also saves Beauty and Alane again when they are in trouble again. She is the person that would also say “Pretty is as pretty diz,” which is the family motto of the McElwrath’s.
Cody Nelson: Cody was Beauty’s friend for years, but stopped in the summer before sixth grade. He now hangs out with the popular crowd at school and ignores and makes fun of Beauty.
Themes
Friendship Beauty and Alane’s relationship shows how true friendship can form despite issues that would prevent it. A lack of friendship in seen between the two girls and many of their classmates
Inner Beauty An important quote in this story is “Pretty is as prety diz.” This means that inner beauty will show through as outer beauty and is much more important than being traditionally beautiful. This is shown very much through the character of Alane. The novel also suggests that Beauty is learning to follow this motto more and will grow into a strong woman like her mother and grandmother.
Death and Dying Alane is slowly dying and she must deal with the fact that her life is ending after only twelve or thirteen years when most people live until the age she is physically, 70. Beauty also deals with the death of her Great Granny Dortothy Lu Lu and leans that no one blames her for her great grandmother’s death. Beauty also deals with the impending death of her best friend, Alane.
Critical reception
This novel was given mixed reviews from four different professional reviewing sources. None of the sources gave the novel a bad review, but some were more critical than others. One source said that “some of Beauty's behavior is inconsistent [and] Alane's character is better developed.” (Horn Book) Another review took a completely different take and says that Beauty’s “voice is consistent and easy to believe. She is as moody and self-conscious as any girl her age. Readers will relate to her struggles to fit in while being true to herself. Alane is less believable. She has social graces far beyond her years, and readers never see her struggle.” (School Library Journal) Yet another review states that “Williams demonstrates strong insight into the sixth-grade mind.” (Kirkus) However, all of the sources appear to agree that the story is interesting and touching. It is suggested as a “lovely story that will reach many middle-school girls.” (Kirkus)
Other Books by Carol Lynch Williams
- A Mother to Embarrass Me
- Caroline Autumn
- Christmas in Heaven
- My Angelica
- If I Forget, You Remember
- Victoria's Courage
- Caroline's Secret
- Catherine's Remembrance
- Esther's Celebration
- Marciea's Melody
- Anna's Gift
- Laurel's Flight
- Sarah's Quest
- The True Colors of Caitlynne Jackson
References
- Pretty Like Us, The Horn Book Guide Spring 2009. Children’s Literature Comprehensive Database. The CLCD Company, ILL. Rohrbach Library, Kutztown, PA. 13 Apr 2009.
- “Pretty Like Us.” Kirkus Reviews, September 1, 2008. NoveList. EBSCOhost. Rohrbach Library, Kutztown, PA. 13 Apr 2009.
- "Pretty Like Us." School Library Journal Review, Gr 4-6, January 1, 2009. NoveList. EBSCOhost. Rohrbach Library, Kutztown, PA. 13 Apr 2009.
- “Author Profile – Carol Lynch Williams.” Utah Children’s Writers and Illustrators. 2007. 13 Apr 2009.
- Ritz, Karen. “Birthday Bios: Carol Lynch Williams.” Children’s Literature Network, 2007. 13 Apr 2009.
- “Carol Lynch Williams.” Mormon Literature & Creative Arts. 2003. 13 Apr 2009.